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  1. Hey Payton,
    The first thing I noticed when I clicked on your site was there was not a link to a comment wall so I think you might need to add one. I really enjoyed the story you told in your introduction. It was done well and precise. I noticed on the last lines of the story the font seems to be bigger than what the rest of the story is typed in. I was wondering, is there a reason for that or was it just accidental. In your author’s note I noticed the same thing. I was also wondering what other stories we will be reading about in your storybook. It could be useful to give us a little hint so that way could prepare ourselves for the epic stories we are about to read. If the stories that follow are just as good as the one you wrote in the introduction then I think we are in for a good time. I can’t wait to read more of your stories.


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